Friday, December 12, 2014

Final Review

1. Timeliness- the newness of the facts.
2. Proximity- the nearness of a given event to your place of publication.
3. Human Interest- the drama that surrounds people involved in an emotional struggle.
4. Prominence- the "newsworthiness" of an individual, organization or place.
5. Conflict- the meeting of two or more opposing forces. These can be physical, emotional or philosophical.
6. Interviews-
7. Research
8. Quotations
9. Yes-no question
10. Follow-up question
11. Objective writing
12. Transition paragraph
13. Hard news story
14. Soft news story
15. Inverted Pyramid
16. Third-person point of view
17. 5 Ws and H lead
18. editing
19. attribution
20. paraphrase
21. fragmentary quotation
22. direct quotation
23. partial quotation
24. Uses of quotations 
25. When to use quotations
26. When quotations are unnecessary or not desired
27. Editorial- a different kind of opinion/commentary that appears in evert daily newspaper in the country and in most high school newspapers as well.
28. editorial page- 
29. columns
30. editorial that criticizes- They constructively criticize actions, decisions or situations while 
31. editorial that explains
32. editorial that persuades
33. letter to the editor

Tuesday, December 9, 2014

feature story notes

  • Point of View- All stories need to be written in 3rd person *no I, we, me, my* (except for opinion/commentary pieces)
  • Tense- past, present, future; usually past tense *the feature writing story should be in past tense*
  • Names- Use first and last name and then after that use only last name, for people with the same last name, ex: Ted Reeves, then later talk about him as last name, then using first name when they share a last name, Jerry Reeves, Ted or Jerry, Tom Reeves, Ted, Jerry or Tom, Tom Reeves jr., Ted Jerry, Tom, Tom, jr.
  • Quote/ Transition style- transition statements should be followed by a quote: statement, then quote that goes along with the statement, can be multiple statements and then quote
  • Story Telling- don't say the questions, its not about the interview you have to tell the story, have factual statements, the person you interviewed should be telling the story
  • Said- there shouldn't be any hint of what the question was, the questions should be turned into statements, always use said every time you are talking about what they told you
  • Simple and Concise- Don't have run on sentences, no more than 4 commas in a sentence, they should be short and simple. In most paragraphs there is only one sentence; statement, hit enter, quote, and never have long paragraphs. Should have 25-30 word sentences
  • Word Use- Write as though a 6th grader would be reading it, it should be easy for the them to understand. Sometimes big words can be good, but sometimes they can be bad.
  • Formatting- should be separate paragraphs for each statement and quote
  • Spell Checks and Grammar- no excuses for spelling if using spell check, don't rely on spellcheck to get everything right, double check. Work on grammar; use it correctly. Print and read it out loud to catch any grammar mistakes, read backwards out loud for spelling mistakes.
Edit marks-
ww= wrong word and if it is crossed out it is wrong
punctuation- backwards s with quotation marks and commas in it, switch punctuation
said with line over it connected down and anger another word
L- new paragraph
word underlined or crossed out with an sp mean its is spell wrong
check mark or exclamation point- take it out
brackets- something wrong with sentence or paragraph 
Two vertical lines- extra space or needs space

Friday, December 5, 2014

feature story rough draft




The opportunity of a lifetime is a thing someone cannot pass up, especially when that opportunity is to get married in Italy. When Cassandra and Steve got the chance to get married in Rome, Italy they took it.

 

Traveling was something they always loved to do and they were planning to get married soon. Italy was the perfect place to do it, so they packed up their stuff and went to Italy for a month. They traveled to Germany, France and Italy along the journey.

 

While in Italy they wanted to take their time for sightseeing and went to The Coliseum in Rome, the Leaning Tower of Pisa, the Venice Grand Canal and The Pantheon over the duration of their stay.

 

There are so many amazing and diverse foods in Italy, mastered over hundreds of years and perfected by simplicity. Italian cuisine is one of the most popular types of food in the world and is known for its taste.

 

“My favorite dish was the pasta e fagioli because it had such a unique flavor and my least favorite was the insalata caprese because it was really salty,” Cassandra said.

 

Cheese and wine are an important part of the cuisine along with coffee and specifically espresso. Some of the most popular foods are pizza and pasta, which is carried over to America and other parts of the world.

               

About 57 million people live in Italy, making for a diverse and unique culture group. Italians are said to be a warm, friendly and loud because they believe in living life to the fullest and love to be around family and friends.

 

“We met a woman at the hotel we stayed at that showed us around Rome and another woman that we met in one of the churches that showed us some of the best food around town.” Cassandra said. “They were all very kind trying to help us get where we wanted to go.”

 

Italy has tons of amazing sights to see like beautiful ancient buildings and the blue waters of the Mediterranean and Tyrrhenian Seas.

 

“My favorite memory about the trip was going to the Vatican City inside Rome. It was amazing!” Cassandra said. Since Vatican City is its own separate country you have to have a passport to get in, even though it is only a square mile big!

 

There are many different customs in Italy than there are in America. For one thing, when addressing someone with a university degree you use the title ‘Dottore’ or ‘Dottoressa’ if it is a woman and if you don’t know their titles you can use signore for a man and signora for a woman or signora.

 

“When you are greeting someone new they say ‘buongiorno’ which means good day and when you are greeting a close friend or young person you say ‘ciao’ or hello and shake hands with the person. When you say goodbye it is customary to shake hands again and say ‘arriverderci’ or ‘arrivederla’ depending on how many people you are talking to. It gets confusing at times.” Cassandra said.

 

Wine is an important export in Italy and is very commonly found in all households. The Italian vineyards are known as some of the best in the world and there are at least 350 common wine grape varieties used to make Italian wines.

 

“One memory I will never forget is walking around the Italian vineyards and watching the vineyard workers collecting grapes and bringing it in to make wine.” Cassandra said.

 

The streets of Italy are narrower than the ones in America so most people walk to where they want to go. There are just a lot of things that are different in Italy than America because it is a different country, but that is obvious with any other country.

 

“In Italy they send a lot of time cooking and their food is so much more rich and organic. Also, everyone in America is always trying to walk so fast, but in Italy life is so much simpler and slow.” Cassandra said.

 

 

There is so much history in the country, especially in Rome, where they got married. The cathedrals scattered around Italy are filled with so much history and are a privilege to go see some day.

 

“We got married in a beautiful church called The Baptist Union of Italy, which was probably one of the prettiest churches I had ever seen.” Cassandra said.

 

There are so many memories of the trip, good and bad, but overall it was something that no one that was a part of the group would ever forget.

 

“I would love to go back soon, especially this was my second time coming since 1998 and I had such a good time,” Cassandra said.

 

Along with Cassandra was her husband Steve, who was the one who organized the trip. He loves to travel and has been to Italy 3 times before this trip, and would still love to go back.

 

“My favorite food was the stacciatella.” Steve said. He likes all kinds of foods and Italian has always been his favorite. Steve also speaks Italian fluently because of his traveling, and actually knows many different languages.

 

Another person who went with them was my mom, which was her first time going to Italy and she would love to go back.

 

“I would love to go back because it was such a beautiful place filled with so many amazing things,” my mom, Rhonda said.

It seems like everyone can find some food to like since there is such a variety in Italy. There are many things to try and love.

“My favorite food was the crostini because they make some of the best bread I have ever had,” Rhonda said.  

The group stayed in Italy for a month, trying to enjoy as much time as possible there while they still could. It was such an amazing experience that has a very close place in their hearts, never being able to forget the carefree and easygoing atmosphere of Italy.
 
 

Wednesday, December 3, 2014

CE #3.4

1. What did downtown shooter Larry Steven McQuillians have written on his chest when he was killed? Page A1 "'Hate' drives gunman…"
He wrote the words "let me die" on his chest in black marker.
2. Why did Bill Cosby step down from his Temple University board position? page A2 "Cosby resigns…."
He had renewed accusations that he drugged and sexually assaulted a string of women over many years.
3. How much did Cyber Monday sales increase this year? Page B7 "Cyber Monday shoppers…"
The sales rose 8.7% from last year.
4. What is Alyssa Kuykenall's favorite animal? Page C5 "Faces off the field"
Elephants are her favorite animal.
5. Of the 24 movies listed here, what is your favorite? Page D1 "24 ways to stay home…"
My favorite movie is Elf.
1. Does this kind of situation make you nervous? Why?
It does kind of make me nervous because there are people out there who're dangerous to the society and could possibly hurt a lot of people. There are a lot of people who are violent and just waiting for the right moment to hurt someone and people need to be aware.
2. If he had survived, what kind of punishment should he have had?
He should have been imprisoned for life because he was fully prepared to kill and while he didn't kill anyone, he injured people and went on multiple fully loaded shooting sprees.
3. What should society be doing to help stop this kind of activity?
Society should be helping people who can't help themselves and should be monitoring who needs the help. There are people that need help, but haven't or can't get it.
4. Do people have the right to believe as they want, but as long as they don't act on it, it is okay?
I think that people have the right to believe whatever they want, as long as they don't act on those beliefs. If the belief is good then it is okay to act on it, but in some cases they should be kept inside.
5. Should the state and federal government be involved in trying to keep this kind of thing from happening again?
Yes they should be monitoring these to people to try and prevent these things from happening again. It should be part of their responsibilities to protect us.
5A. If you said yes to question 5 - what do you think some of the problems might be if they are involved?
If the government is involved then people might get suspicious or they might get arrested for the wrong reasons, like something they didn't do.
5B. If you said no to question 5 - why do you think they shouldn't be involved and who should be in control of trying to stop these kinds of activities?
I said yes.

Monday, December 1, 2014

Feature Story Notes

Primary Interview
  • How long were you in Italy? 
We were there for about a month.
  • What was your favorite place you visited?
My favorite place we went to was the church we got married in.
  • Who was with you on the trip?
I went with my husband Steve and his family.
  • How many places did you go to while in Italy?
We went to the Colosseum in Rome, the leaning tower of Pisa, the Venice Grand Canal and The Pantheon.
  • Where did you get married?
We got married in a beautiful church called The Baptist Union of Italy.
  • What was your favorite memory about the trip?
My favorite memory about the trip was going to Vatican City in Rome. It was amazing!
  • What kinds of food did you eat while you were there?
We had some of the best pizza I had ever had and other Italian dishes like bruschetta, crostini, strolghino, stracciatella, and ciabatta bread.
  • What food was your favorite and what was your least favorite?
My favorite dish was pasta e fagioli and my least favorite was the insalata caprese because it was really salty.
  • Did you go anywhere else other than Italy?
Yes we went to Germany and France also.
  • Did you met any cool people in Europe?
Yes we met a woman at the hotel we stayed at that showed us around Rome and another woman that we met in one of the churches that showed us some of the best food around town.
  • Did you have any culture shock when you got there?
Not really because I travel a lot and I had already been to Italy about 16 years ago.
  • What did enjoy most about the entire trip?
The thing I enjoyed most was spending time with my husband and his family.
  • Did you learn any Italian while you were there?
Yes I did pick up some of the language while I was there.
  • Would you go back if given the opportunity?
Yes I would love to go back.
  • Why did you go on the trip?
We were already going on the trip this summer anyway, so we decided to just get married while we were there.
  • What were your ways of transportation?
In a lot of Italy there isn't a lot room to drive around like there is in America, so most of the time we walked or rented a a car when going longer distances.
  • Was there anything different that you saw in Italy that you wouldn't normally see in America?
Well in Italy they spend a lot of time cooking and their food is so much more rich and organic and everyone in America is always trying to walk fast, but in Italy life is so much simpler and slow.
  • What are some of the customs in Italy that you had to learn?
When you are greeting someone new they say 'buongiorno' which means good day and when you are greeting a close friend or young person you say 'ciao' or hello and shake hands with the person, and when you say goodbye it is customary to shake hands again and say 'arriverderci' or 'arrivederla' depending on how many people you are talking to. It can all get confusing at times.
  • Where did you stay while you were there?
We stayed at the Boscolo Exedra Roma in Rome, Italy.
  • What is memory that you will never forget while you were there?
One memory I will never forget is walking around the Italian vineyards and watching the vineyard workers collecting grapes and bringing it to made in to wine.

Supporting Interview #1- Steve
  • What was your favorite part of the trip?
My favorite part of the trip was going to the Colosseum in Rome.
  • Do you know any Italian?
Yes I have learned quite a bit of Italian over the years.
  • Have you been there before this trip?
Yes I have been there 3 times including this trip.
  • What was your favorite food that you ate there?
My favorite food was the stracciatella.
  • Would you bad if given the opportunity?
Yes I would go back.

Supporting Interview #2- Mom
  • What was your favorite part of the trip?
My favorite part of the trip was watching the wedding and just seeing the church.
  • Do you know any Italian?
Other than a few basic words, not really.
  • Have you been there before this trip?
No, I had never been to Italy before this trip.
  • What was your favorite food that you ate there?
My favorite food was the crostini because they make some really amazing bread.
  • Would you bad if given the opportunity?
Yes I would love to go back.