Friday, December 12, 2014

Final Review

1. Timeliness- the newness of the facts.
2. Proximity- the nearness of a given event to your place of publication.
3. Human Interest- the drama that surrounds people involved in an emotional struggle.
4. Prominence- the "newsworthiness" of an individual, organization or place.
5. Conflict- the meeting of two or more opposing forces. These can be physical, emotional or philosophical.
6. Interviews-
7. Research
8. Quotations
9. Yes-no question
10. Follow-up question
11. Objective writing
12. Transition paragraph
13. Hard news story
14. Soft news story
15. Inverted Pyramid
16. Third-person point of view
17. 5 Ws and H lead
18. editing
19. attribution
20. paraphrase
21. fragmentary quotation
22. direct quotation
23. partial quotation
24. Uses of quotations 
25. When to use quotations
26. When quotations are unnecessary or not desired
27. Editorial- a different kind of opinion/commentary that appears in evert daily newspaper in the country and in most high school newspapers as well.
28. editorial page- 
29. columns
30. editorial that criticizes- They constructively criticize actions, decisions or situations while 
31. editorial that explains
32. editorial that persuades
33. letter to the editor

Tuesday, December 9, 2014

feature story notes

  • Point of View- All stories need to be written in 3rd person *no I, we, me, my* (except for opinion/commentary pieces)
  • Tense- past, present, future; usually past tense *the feature writing story should be in past tense*
  • Names- Use first and last name and then after that use only last name, for people with the same last name, ex: Ted Reeves, then later talk about him as last name, then using first name when they share a last name, Jerry Reeves, Ted or Jerry, Tom Reeves, Ted, Jerry or Tom, Tom Reeves jr., Ted Jerry, Tom, Tom, jr.
  • Quote/ Transition style- transition statements should be followed by a quote: statement, then quote that goes along with the statement, can be multiple statements and then quote
  • Story Telling- don't say the questions, its not about the interview you have to tell the story, have factual statements, the person you interviewed should be telling the story
  • Said- there shouldn't be any hint of what the question was, the questions should be turned into statements, always use said every time you are talking about what they told you
  • Simple and Concise- Don't have run on sentences, no more than 4 commas in a sentence, they should be short and simple. In most paragraphs there is only one sentence; statement, hit enter, quote, and never have long paragraphs. Should have 25-30 word sentences
  • Word Use- Write as though a 6th grader would be reading it, it should be easy for the them to understand. Sometimes big words can be good, but sometimes they can be bad.
  • Formatting- should be separate paragraphs for each statement and quote
  • Spell Checks and Grammar- no excuses for spelling if using spell check, don't rely on spellcheck to get everything right, double check. Work on grammar; use it correctly. Print and read it out loud to catch any grammar mistakes, read backwards out loud for spelling mistakes.
Edit marks-
ww= wrong word and if it is crossed out it is wrong
punctuation- backwards s with quotation marks and commas in it, switch punctuation
said with line over it connected down and anger another word
L- new paragraph
word underlined or crossed out with an sp mean its is spell wrong
check mark or exclamation point- take it out
brackets- something wrong with sentence or paragraph 
Two vertical lines- extra space or needs space

Friday, December 5, 2014

feature story rough draft




The opportunity of a lifetime is a thing someone cannot pass up, especially when that opportunity is to get married in Italy. When Cassandra and Steve got the chance to get married in Rome, Italy they took it.

 

Traveling was something they always loved to do and they were planning to get married soon. Italy was the perfect place to do it, so they packed up their stuff and went to Italy for a month. They traveled to Germany, France and Italy along the journey.

 

While in Italy they wanted to take their time for sightseeing and went to The Coliseum in Rome, the Leaning Tower of Pisa, the Venice Grand Canal and The Pantheon over the duration of their stay.

 

There are so many amazing and diverse foods in Italy, mastered over hundreds of years and perfected by simplicity. Italian cuisine is one of the most popular types of food in the world and is known for its taste.

 

“My favorite dish was the pasta e fagioli because it had such a unique flavor and my least favorite was the insalata caprese because it was really salty,” Cassandra said.

 

Cheese and wine are an important part of the cuisine along with coffee and specifically espresso. Some of the most popular foods are pizza and pasta, which is carried over to America and other parts of the world.

               

About 57 million people live in Italy, making for a diverse and unique culture group. Italians are said to be a warm, friendly and loud because they believe in living life to the fullest and love to be around family and friends.

 

“We met a woman at the hotel we stayed at that showed us around Rome and another woman that we met in one of the churches that showed us some of the best food around town.” Cassandra said. “They were all very kind trying to help us get where we wanted to go.”

 

Italy has tons of amazing sights to see like beautiful ancient buildings and the blue waters of the Mediterranean and Tyrrhenian Seas.

 

“My favorite memory about the trip was going to the Vatican City inside Rome. It was amazing!” Cassandra said. Since Vatican City is its own separate country you have to have a passport to get in, even though it is only a square mile big!

 

There are many different customs in Italy than there are in America. For one thing, when addressing someone with a university degree you use the title ‘Dottore’ or ‘Dottoressa’ if it is a woman and if you don’t know their titles you can use signore for a man and signora for a woman or signora.

 

“When you are greeting someone new they say ‘buongiorno’ which means good day and when you are greeting a close friend or young person you say ‘ciao’ or hello and shake hands with the person. When you say goodbye it is customary to shake hands again and say ‘arriverderci’ or ‘arrivederla’ depending on how many people you are talking to. It gets confusing at times.” Cassandra said.

 

Wine is an important export in Italy and is very commonly found in all households. The Italian vineyards are known as some of the best in the world and there are at least 350 common wine grape varieties used to make Italian wines.

 

“One memory I will never forget is walking around the Italian vineyards and watching the vineyard workers collecting grapes and bringing it in to make wine.” Cassandra said.

 

The streets of Italy are narrower than the ones in America so most people walk to where they want to go. There are just a lot of things that are different in Italy than America because it is a different country, but that is obvious with any other country.

 

“In Italy they send a lot of time cooking and their food is so much more rich and organic. Also, everyone in America is always trying to walk so fast, but in Italy life is so much simpler and slow.” Cassandra said.

 

 

There is so much history in the country, especially in Rome, where they got married. The cathedrals scattered around Italy are filled with so much history and are a privilege to go see some day.

 

“We got married in a beautiful church called The Baptist Union of Italy, which was probably one of the prettiest churches I had ever seen.” Cassandra said.

 

There are so many memories of the trip, good and bad, but overall it was something that no one that was a part of the group would ever forget.

 

“I would love to go back soon, especially this was my second time coming since 1998 and I had such a good time,” Cassandra said.

 

Along with Cassandra was her husband Steve, who was the one who organized the trip. He loves to travel and has been to Italy 3 times before this trip, and would still love to go back.

 

“My favorite food was the stacciatella.” Steve said. He likes all kinds of foods and Italian has always been his favorite. Steve also speaks Italian fluently because of his traveling, and actually knows many different languages.

 

Another person who went with them was my mom, which was her first time going to Italy and she would love to go back.

 

“I would love to go back because it was such a beautiful place filled with so many amazing things,” my mom, Rhonda said.

It seems like everyone can find some food to like since there is such a variety in Italy. There are many things to try and love.

“My favorite food was the crostini because they make some of the best bread I have ever had,” Rhonda said.  

The group stayed in Italy for a month, trying to enjoy as much time as possible there while they still could. It was such an amazing experience that has a very close place in their hearts, never being able to forget the carefree and easygoing atmosphere of Italy.
 
 

Wednesday, December 3, 2014

CE #3.4

1. What did downtown shooter Larry Steven McQuillians have written on his chest when he was killed? Page A1 "'Hate' drives gunman…"
He wrote the words "let me die" on his chest in black marker.
2. Why did Bill Cosby step down from his Temple University board position? page A2 "Cosby resigns…."
He had renewed accusations that he drugged and sexually assaulted a string of women over many years.
3. How much did Cyber Monday sales increase this year? Page B7 "Cyber Monday shoppers…"
The sales rose 8.7% from last year.
4. What is Alyssa Kuykenall's favorite animal? Page C5 "Faces off the field"
Elephants are her favorite animal.
5. Of the 24 movies listed here, what is your favorite? Page D1 "24 ways to stay home…"
My favorite movie is Elf.
1. Does this kind of situation make you nervous? Why?
It does kind of make me nervous because there are people out there who're dangerous to the society and could possibly hurt a lot of people. There are a lot of people who are violent and just waiting for the right moment to hurt someone and people need to be aware.
2. If he had survived, what kind of punishment should he have had?
He should have been imprisoned for life because he was fully prepared to kill and while he didn't kill anyone, he injured people and went on multiple fully loaded shooting sprees.
3. What should society be doing to help stop this kind of activity?
Society should be helping people who can't help themselves and should be monitoring who needs the help. There are people that need help, but haven't or can't get it.
4. Do people have the right to believe as they want, but as long as they don't act on it, it is okay?
I think that people have the right to believe whatever they want, as long as they don't act on those beliefs. If the belief is good then it is okay to act on it, but in some cases they should be kept inside.
5. Should the state and federal government be involved in trying to keep this kind of thing from happening again?
Yes they should be monitoring these to people to try and prevent these things from happening again. It should be part of their responsibilities to protect us.
5A. If you said yes to question 5 - what do you think some of the problems might be if they are involved?
If the government is involved then people might get suspicious or they might get arrested for the wrong reasons, like something they didn't do.
5B. If you said no to question 5 - why do you think they shouldn't be involved and who should be in control of trying to stop these kinds of activities?
I said yes.

Monday, December 1, 2014

Feature Story Notes

Primary Interview
  • How long were you in Italy? 
We were there for about a month.
  • What was your favorite place you visited?
My favorite place we went to was the church we got married in.
  • Who was with you on the trip?
I went with my husband Steve and his family.
  • How many places did you go to while in Italy?
We went to the Colosseum in Rome, the leaning tower of Pisa, the Venice Grand Canal and The Pantheon.
  • Where did you get married?
We got married in a beautiful church called The Baptist Union of Italy.
  • What was your favorite memory about the trip?
My favorite memory about the trip was going to Vatican City in Rome. It was amazing!
  • What kinds of food did you eat while you were there?
We had some of the best pizza I had ever had and other Italian dishes like bruschetta, crostini, strolghino, stracciatella, and ciabatta bread.
  • What food was your favorite and what was your least favorite?
My favorite dish was pasta e fagioli and my least favorite was the insalata caprese because it was really salty.
  • Did you go anywhere else other than Italy?
Yes we went to Germany and France also.
  • Did you met any cool people in Europe?
Yes we met a woman at the hotel we stayed at that showed us around Rome and another woman that we met in one of the churches that showed us some of the best food around town.
  • Did you have any culture shock when you got there?
Not really because I travel a lot and I had already been to Italy about 16 years ago.
  • What did enjoy most about the entire trip?
The thing I enjoyed most was spending time with my husband and his family.
  • Did you learn any Italian while you were there?
Yes I did pick up some of the language while I was there.
  • Would you go back if given the opportunity?
Yes I would love to go back.
  • Why did you go on the trip?
We were already going on the trip this summer anyway, so we decided to just get married while we were there.
  • What were your ways of transportation?
In a lot of Italy there isn't a lot room to drive around like there is in America, so most of the time we walked or rented a a car when going longer distances.
  • Was there anything different that you saw in Italy that you wouldn't normally see in America?
Well in Italy they spend a lot of time cooking and their food is so much more rich and organic and everyone in America is always trying to walk fast, but in Italy life is so much simpler and slow.
  • What are some of the customs in Italy that you had to learn?
When you are greeting someone new they say 'buongiorno' which means good day and when you are greeting a close friend or young person you say 'ciao' or hello and shake hands with the person, and when you say goodbye it is customary to shake hands again and say 'arriverderci' or 'arrivederla' depending on how many people you are talking to. It can all get confusing at times.
  • Where did you stay while you were there?
We stayed at the Boscolo Exedra Roma in Rome, Italy.
  • What is memory that you will never forget while you were there?
One memory I will never forget is walking around the Italian vineyards and watching the vineyard workers collecting grapes and bringing it to made in to wine.

Supporting Interview #1- Steve
  • What was your favorite part of the trip?
My favorite part of the trip was going to the Colosseum in Rome.
  • Do you know any Italian?
Yes I have learned quite a bit of Italian over the years.
  • Have you been there before this trip?
Yes I have been there 3 times including this trip.
  • What was your favorite food that you ate there?
My favorite food was the stracciatella.
  • Would you bad if given the opportunity?
Yes I would go back.

Supporting Interview #2- Mom
  • What was your favorite part of the trip?
My favorite part of the trip was watching the wedding and just seeing the church.
  • Do you know any Italian?
Other than a few basic words, not really.
  • Have you been there before this trip?
No, I had never been to Italy before this trip.
  • What was your favorite food that you ate there?
My favorite food was the crostini because they make some really amazing bread.
  • Would you bad if given the opportunity?
Yes I would love to go back.

Tuesday, November 25, 2014

Key Ingredients

1. List 3 details that you found above that help the story.
  • The money he had promised to pay would cover all expenses: the room, the minibar, room service should they order it, the train ticket that had brought her from New York and, naturally, her time.
  • A 47-page affidavit from an F.B.I. agent investigating a prostitution ring described the man at the hotel as “Client 9” and included considerable detail about him, the prostitute and his payment methods. 
  • But a law enforcement official and another person briefed on the case have identified Client 9 as Eliot Spitzer, the governor of New York.
2. There are details that you might not include in a regular news story, please list at least 2 of them.
This was at the Mayflower, one of Washington’s choicer hotels. Her client for the evening, a return customer, had booked Room 871. 
3. Do you want to keep reading?
Yes

4. List 3 descriptive details that you found above that help the story.
She lay on a torn, moldy mattress on the floor. She was curled on her side, long legs tucked into her emaciated chest. Her ribs and collarbone jutted out; one skinny arm was slung over her face; her black hair was matted, crawling with lice.
5. There are details that you might not include in a regular news story, please list at least 2 of them.
Her ribs and collarbone jutted out; one skinny arm was slung over her face; her black hair was matted, crawling with lice. Insect bites, rashes and sores pocked her skin.
6. What conditions exist regarding this child that the author describes to you?
She was curled on her side, long legs tucked into her emaciated chest. Her ribs and collarbone jutted out; one skinny arm was slung over her face; her black hair was matted, crawling with lice. Insect bites, rashes and sores pocked her skin. Though she looked old enough to be in school, she was naked — except for a swollen diaper.
7. Do you want to keep reading?
I would like to know what happened to her.

8. How does the quote help the transition statement above it?
The quote explained what happened and gave more details about the fire.
9. Do you want to keep reading?
Yes

10. List 3 descriptive details that you found above that help the story.
On the morning of July 4, 2007, ranch hands were fixing a water pipe on private land in a narrow canyon off the road to Zaca Lake, about 15 miles north of Solvang. Sparks from a metal grinder jumped into some dry grass. Soon flames were rushing through the brush toward Zaca Ridge.
11. There are details you might not include in a regular news story, please list at least 2 of them.
By the next day, nearly 1,000 firefighters were trying to box the fire into a small area. But late that afternoon, the Zaca made a run, moving east into Los Padres National Forest. By July 7, Forest Service officials realized they were facing a potential monster.
12. What was the anecdote that the author used in the story.
The anecdote in the story is the fire coming to life and spreading.
13. What was the ironical part of this story regarding how the fire started.
It was ironic that the workers were fixing a water pipe that caused the fire to start and the water from theater pipe could had been used to put out the fire.
14. Do you want to keep reading?
Yes

15. List 3 pieces of background information found in these 3 paragraphs.
A decade ago, the agency spent $307 million on fire suppression. In California, state wildfire spending has shot up 150% in the last decade, to more than $1 billion a year. Wildfire costs are busting the Forest Service budget. 
16. Which one do you think is most crucial?
Fire is chewing through so much Forest Service money that Congress is considering a separate federal account to cover the cost of catastrophic blazes.
17. Do you want to keep reading?
Yes

Monday, November 24, 2014

CE #3.3

1. Why did Bowie student Jack Guy design Grade Buzz? Page A1 "Student launches..." Did you know this was in our school newspaper 2 weeks ago!!!!
For students to easily check their grades, attendance records and tutoring times.
2. After the huge snowstorms hit Buffalo, NY last week, what is the next major concern for the region? Page A5 "Winter Weather"
The melting snow creating flooding in the flood prone areas.
3. What point is cartoonist, Chan Lowe, trying to make in the political cartoon on page A11?
That people are spending so much money on sales and discounted items that we are growing broke.
4. Why is Alexis Alpha suing the San Marcos police department? Page B1 "Woman sues police…"
She says to have suffered from broken teeth and a concussion due to San Marcos police officers while being arrested for something she said she didn't do.
5. Why are theme parks struggling to attract new visitors? Page B7 "Changing theme of parks"
We are so involved in our tis and electronics that we don't have time for theme parks to keep up with technology.
Short Answer: What impact does Capitol Metro's decision to raise fares by $.50 in January potentially have on the people of Austin?
The Capitol Metro's raie in bus fairs could affect the people of Austin because less people could be able to ride the bus and afford it. They might not have enough money to ride the bus frequently and pay the money.
Think logically here and think outside the box. 
Who does this impact the most and what will happen to their lives? This mostly impacts the poorer people in Austin and the people who don't have cars, because if they have to spend more money on bus fares, it adds up in the future and they may not be able to pay for something important, like bills and food. In some cases every cent counts, and they don't need to spend extra money on just trying to go where they need to.

Short story with information on Page B2 under Community News - "Bus fares change…"


Thursday, November 20, 2014

CE #3.2

1. Why would the city spend money to develop two PGA-level golf courses in East Austin? Page A1 "Austin council considers…"
It is supposed to be an economic development boom for austin and a tourist attraction to bring in more revenue.
2. What is the % of 1st time gun buyers purchasing weapons at Metro Shooting Supplies in Ferguson, MO? Page A2 "Gun sales surge…"
About 60%
3. How many feet of snow fell in Buffalo, NY in a 24 hour period yesterday? Page A3 "7 dead in Buffalo…"
As much as 5 and a half feet of snow yesterday.
4. Why were 2 Austin Police Department officers suspended yesterday? Page B1 "2 officers suspended…"
Remarks caught on video about jokes on rape and inappropriate humor.
5. What has helped Target stores report an increase of 3.2% on profits? BE SPECIFIC Page B5 "Target rebounds…"
Shoppers bought beauty products, toys and back to school items after a data breach last year.
6. Who are the current projected teams who will play in the 1st ever NCAA football play-offs? Page C3 "Power Four plus more" List the 4 teams projected by both the National Staff Writers and the other team selected by the Austin American Statesman for a total of 5 teams.
1. Alabama 2. Oregon 3. Florida State 4. Mississippi State 5. Baylor
7. What are three of the best items you can build to improve your outdoor space to make it more livable? Page SA3 "Move your lifestyle…"
Outdoor kitchens, outdoor fireplaces, and fire pits.
8. Why is Players burger joint closing" Page D1 "Customers reminisce about…"
The UT System Board of Regents voted to purchase the land in 2012 for Rowling Hall, a new addition to the UT business section.
9. Which of the 5 items in the Long Weekend Five Things to Do would you like to go to? Page D2
I would like to go to the Jo's Coffee November Movies because it looks like a lot of fun.
10. Do you ever read your horoscope? Go to page D5 and read yours and respond to the predictions.
I read the horoscope when I see it but not that much. I thought it was interesting because my birthday is today and it said that this year will be bring a lot to be grateful for and that good things will happen in the future.

Tuesday, November 18, 2014

Feature Story Brainstorm

1. Who is your main subject?
My Aunt Cassandra
2. Supporting interviews (who else do you need to talk to)?
My Uncle Steve and my mom
3. What is the topic or potential topic?
Their wedding/honeymoon in Italy
4. Which angle from above will you write the story?
3rd person
5. Then to help you get going faster, come up with 20 questions that you can ask your main subject. Type these in your blog.

  1. How long were you in Italy?
  2. What was your favorite place you visited?
  3. Who was with you on the trip?
  4. How many places did you go to while in Italy?
  5. Where did you get married?
  6. What was your favorite memory about the trip?
  7. What kinds of food did you eat while you were there?
  8. What food was your favorite and what was your least favorite?
  9. Did you go anywhere else other than Italy?
  10. Did you met any cool people in Europe?
  11. Did you have any culture shock when you got there?
  12. What did enjoy most about the entire trip?
  13. Did you learn any Italian while you were there?
  14. Would you go back if given the opportunity?
  15. Why did you go on the trip?
  16. What were your ways of transportation?
  17. Was there anything different that you saw in Italy that you wouldn't normally see in America?
  18. What are some of the customs in Italy that you had to learn?
  19. Where did you stay while you were there?
  20. What is memory that you will never forget while you were there?
6. Once you complete that portion, you need to come up with 5-10 questions you need to ask your supporting interviews. Type these into your blog. You may need different questions for each supporting subject.

  1. What was your favorite part of the trip?
  2. Do you know any Italian?
  3. Have you been there before this trip?
  4. What was your favorite food that you ate there?
  5. Would you bad if given the opportunity?


7. You will need to do a little research on the topic you expect to interview your main subject about. Take a little time and do some google searching - find at least 5 new things about the intended topic you should know before you interview your main subject. List those on your blog.

8. Write when you plan to conduct the interview(s)?
Over Thanksgiving break.
9. Where you will interview them (some interviews are better to do in the persons environment, while others should be done in public places, ALL interviews should be done in person)?
My house/ Aunt's house
10. How will you record the information? (taking notes is ideal, and if you want to record the conversation you MUST get permission. You can do both if they will allow you to record, this is a really strong technique that you could use.)
Taking notes, and/or recording

Friday, November 14, 2014

CE #3.1

1. How many undocumented immigrants could be impacted by proposed immigration changes? Page A1 "Obama immigration overhaul.."
Up to 5 million.
2. Why will the Philae lander potentially stop working in a couple of days after its historic landing on a comet? Page A3 "Cliff on comet's surface…"
They only have a day or two left until the battery is exhausted.
3. How many homeless people were provided shelter from the cold last night through city services? How many men were at ARCH? Page B1 "Shelters opening doors…"
About 330 people and 180 men were at ARCH.
4. Who were the American and National Leage MVP's in Major League Baseball? Page C5
Clayton Kershaw- National League MVP Mike Trout- American League MVP
5. How can you limit ad tracking on your iPhone? Page SA4 "What Atlas, Facebook's ad…"
On iPhones you can go to settings, privacy, advertising and turn on the button "limit ad tracking"
Short Answer: Read the article on Page A1 "Cruz's net neutrality views irk techies".

A. What does "Net Neutrality" mean?
B. Do you think that the government should be involved in Internet regulations?
C. WHY OR WHY NOT?
D. What is Ted Cruz's view on net neutrality?
E. What do techies think about Cruz's views?

"Net Neutrality" is the internet regulators being able to access all internet content. I don't think that the government should be involved in internet regulations because people should be able to 

Wednesday, November 12, 2014

Lone Star Dispatch Issue #2

Front Page Article:
Unforgettable Proposal
Right on the football field, Pablo Riera kneeled down on one knee and preposed to his long time girlfriend, Christine with her daughter along. With the band playing, Silver Stars lined up and waiting, and the cheerleaders shaking their pompoms and holding up the signs "will you marry me?" it was the perfect engagement that took a lot of time to plan. Christine and her daughter both said yes when he proposed, keeping family love in the air. After many months of planning and getting both of their mothers flown out to see this event, the yes was a relief for Riera.

Who- Pablo Riera
What- He proposed to his girlfriend Christine
When- Homecoming game against Akins
Where- Burger Stadium
Why- For the perfect and original proposal
How- The band, Silver Stars and cheerleaders all helped to make this possible

Who was quoted in this story?
Pablo Riera, Kate Buffler and Jamie Dorsey.
What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"I was ecstatic when she said yes and her daughter was there too which made the moment even more special, this is a big step in my life and it made me very happy," Riera said. "Now its on to planning the wedding."
Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes
Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
A statement

Student Life Article:
Are homecoming proposals worth all the stress?
Every year tons of student spend hours thinking and creating the perfect way to ask someone to homecoming. The stress and pressure to ask someone out is sometimes overwhelming and many students think that the money and time spent into the proposal isn't worth it, especially when the most fun is the actual dance. Some girls get heartbroken when a guy doesn't ask them to the dance, but sometimes the most fun is just hanging out with your friends.

Who- The students at Bowie
What- Homecoming Proposals
When- The homecoming dance, October 18th
Where- Bowie High School
Why- Homecoming dance
How- Students were asked in many different ways to go to Homecoming

Who was quoted in the story?
Patricia Maney, Sierra Crum, Kristina Tidwell and Jeremy Branham.
What quote was the strongest in your opinion?
"The experience is the dinner, the dance, the group you're with and the fun you have. The five seconds it takes to ask someone to go is just silly," Maney said.
Did the lead sentence make you want to keep reading?
Yes
Was the conclusion a quote or a statement?
A quote

News Article:
The band marches to fourth place
The JBHSOPE wins fourth place at state in San Antonio in the Alamodome last tuesday. They 

Friday, November 7, 2014

Feature Writing Preview

1. What is the difference between a hard news lead (lede) and the one you read above?
A hard news lead is 
2. What paragraph(s) did you learn the following information?
a. Who- Paragraph 2
b. What- Paragraph 2
c. Where- Paragraph 2
d. When- Paragraphs 2 & 3
e. Why- Paragraph
f. How

3. Are there quotes in this story?
Yes
4. Are those quotes arranged in the "quote-transiton" style we used in news writing?
Not all of them
5. Who is quoted in the story?
Kevin McLoughlin, Ted Williams, Doral Chenoweth III, Ken Andrews, Tony Florentino, Shane Cormier, Frank Willson, and Patrick Harris.
6. What quote is the most powerful in the story, in your opinion?
"My boss said to me: 'If you don't get him hired, you're fired,'" said Kevin McLoughlin, director of post-production films for the National Football League.
7. How many paragraphs is the story?
33 paragraphs
8. How many words is the story (hint: you can copy and paste into Word and get a word count)?
784 words
9. What is significant about the lead (lede) and the final paragraph of the story?

10. Why do you think the writer did that with the lead (lede) and final paragraph?

11. Was the story interesting to read?
Yes
12. When you finished the story, but BEFORE you watched the video, did you want to hear the voice?
Yes
13. Multimedia approaches are powerful tools, what impact did the video have when watched directly after reading the story?

14. Would the story have lost its impact without the video?
Yes because
15. Did the writer try to come up with a way for you to hear the voice, i.e. did he try to describe the voice or give you a way to "hear" the voice without really hearing it?
Yes
16. How did the writer do that?
The writer added familiar quotes in between information to give the reader a way of hearing his voice without really hearing it.